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Thursday 26 September 2013

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

WALT: describe a story character


Here is a link to my rubric score
I assessed my character profile with my teacher then worked towards the next level up.

Tuesday 10 September 2013

cross country run



 W A L T       plan my account carefully so I am clear about what I am writting and why.










I was running suddenly I saw a big muddy puddle and we run throw it and It was yucky. It got stuck In my toes but I got It out when I was running through the puddles when I was running I saw my friend fell into the mud.




When we were all lining up at the start ‘’Mr burt said ready set  boh boh boh!’’ So everybody run and I was beating my friend. I was so puffed man because we had to go everywhere.
Lots of people came past me and I pasted them.




When I came past the finished line I was so happy that all over I was so fursty when I came back I had 3 drinks from the lady. I had muddy feet and muddy close I was so board when I got back to class.