Wiremu Persuasive Writing

I disagree to this writing because who would make up this solution. This piece of writing is very dumb because lots of children won’t to play instead of learning. We will get hungry if there was no morning tea or lunch time and we would been starving and that's why we disagree because whoever made this writing is stupid. Instead of learning we should do games outside or in the school hall and then when it comes to morning tea we should have 1 hour and the same as lunch time.

In the school holidays we should have the same as the christmas holidays. People think that our playtime is wasted but it’s not we have to because we will get hungry and have no fun and nothing to do. If we can’t call anybody's name how would we get there extension to listen at us and encase there was an emergency. If we had to spend 6.5 hours of school everyday we would of been not learning properly and I think some mums and dad will have to pull their children out of school.

We should do outdoor activities everyday so we get fit and settle our minds.