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Tuesday, 15 April 2014

Wiremu Show Not Tell


Show Not Tell By Wiremu And Christopher

Emily asked her sister  "Can I go shopping with you?” Laura replied “No you’re too young”. Emily frowned and stomped down the stairs. Suddenly she slammed the door as hard as she could. “Oh maybe I’m being too mean.  I should let her come with me’’, thought Laura.

Emily grabbed a book and and dropped it on the ground. Then Emily went up stairs.    

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